Be sure to bring the storyboard in to class so I can have the hard copy to look over and offer you feedback via email. It looks like this is maybe the first little bit of your piece, but seems hastily done. Give yourself a break with the final project and see if you can nail down exactly what you want to do--that way, when you go to work on it, you will have a lot of the pre-stuff done.
As far as the video goes, I am conflicted because I asked you to include narration of the story. However, you were one of the only ones who used silence effectively between scenes, and who found images that took on the whole essay in one slice---ending with just a few choice words. I thought that your piece was artistic in that way, and moving. For the final project, be sure that you are allowing yourself enough time to complete it without having to rush or waiting. You have the talent and vision, so put in the time.
Dear Terranni,
ReplyDeleteBe sure to bring the storyboard in to class so I can have the hard copy to look over and offer you feedback via email. It looks like this is maybe the first little bit of your piece, but seems hastily done. Give yourself a break with the final project and see if you can nail down exactly what you want to do--that way, when you go to work on it, you will have a lot of the pre-stuff done.
As far as the video goes, I am conflicted because I asked you to include narration of the story. However, you were one of the only ones who used silence effectively between scenes, and who found images that took on the whole essay in one slice---ending with just a few choice words. I thought that your piece was artistic in that way, and moving. For the final project, be sure that you are allowing yourself enough time to complete it without having to rush or waiting. You have the talent and vision, so put in the time.